EdgeHypermatter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[at&t Spoof]

Pretty sweet, except...

A little too preachy. I don't like preachy. The flash would have been much more enjoyable if it wasn't for the message at the end. It was kind of depressing. Cut that off, and you have yourself a funny flash.

[The CCs humble beginnings]

Thank God

I never would have understood any of this Clock Crew business if not for this flash. I don't care if it's inaccurate. Any explaination is better than none. Man, it feels like a weight has been lifted off my chest... I feel... I feel like I could watch a Clock Crew flash... Maybe they aren't all totally horrible...

RupeeClock responds:

Right...

[Amf-nights Fanf]

Did better than the majority of n00bs

I actually played "Nights" for the Saturn once. Don't remember much, it was so long ago, and what I do remember is kinda trippy. Anyway, for a first submission, this is quite good. Most people just submit the first flash they make and some of them even expect to be showered with praise. Not you. You practiced, and then submitted the first flash you finished and felt was good enough for Newgrounds. You sir, get a cookie.

As for improvements.... well there appears to be a distinct lack of sound effects, and I guess your shading could use some work... It might be nice if the movie was a bit longer... but other than that, it's pretty good for a first submission. I mean. it's not what I'd call front page work, but I think it's good enough to join the Video Game Parodies collection...

[SMaya: Modeling Episode 1]

Kind of boring

What it needs is a voiceover or something. Make it like a tutorial, tell the viewers what it is you're doing. That at least would make it educational. On the other hand, the file size is rather large as it is and adding a voice track would make it even larger. Besides, this isn't technically a flash animation, but rather a movie clip. Which is just another reason to make it a tutorial of sorts. I recommend adding like a little animated avatar. Voiced or not I don't particularly care, so long as it communicates with the audience somehow (If you can't reduce the filesize enough to allow for audio, or you don't like your voice, use speech bubbles).

[Invader Zim: TMHSE]

Almost like the real thing, 'cept shorter.

Very good voice work. A tad short, however still a good watch.

[Super Mario bros Z ep 1 (old series)]

Suprisingly excellant.

Honestly, when I went into this, I half expected a terrible knock off. This was a lesson in not judging a book by its cover, because this knocked me off my feet. Well done! You've shown me the light.